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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take kYYMn
Hi John, How have you been? I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience that has been caused to you and your family due to the really loud noise, as a result of the constant drilling and hammering. I can understanding how annoying the noise can be, considering you suffer from migraine as well. The reason behind this noise is the interior work that is going on, because I am installing new kitchen cupboards and tiles. Unfortunately this cannot be avoided, as most of the kitchen interiors had got damaged due to the fire that had taken place last month. Well, the good news is, most of the work has been completed. I will be getting the rest of the work completed when you are not around, probably during your office hours. Hope this arrangement would suit you better. Looking forward to having dinner with you and your family very soon, mostly after the work is done here. Take care and have a lovely day. Cheers Sam
Hi John,

How have you been? I am
extremely
sorry for the inconvenience that has
been caused
to you and your family due to the
really
loud noise,
as a result
of the constant drilling and hammering. I can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "understand"
understanding
how annoying the noise can be, considering you suffer from migraine
as well
.

The reason behind this noise is the interior
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
that is
going on,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I am installing new kitchen cupboards and tiles. Unfortunately this cannot
be avoided
, as most of the kitchen interiors had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
damaged due to the fire that had taken place last month.

Well, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
news is, most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
has
been completed
. I will be getting the rest of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
completed when you are not around,
probably
during your office hours. Hope this arrangement would suit you better. Looking forward to having dinner with you and your family
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
,
mostly
after the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
is done
here.

Take care and have a lovely day.

Cheers

Sam
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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