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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work You do NOT need to write any addresses. pRRmy
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my intereset to work part time at the Art National Museum as volunteer. The museum means a lot to me as I am a big fan of arts since my childhood. I have always wanted to guide tourists and explain to them about paints and sculptures. Currently, I am in my second year at Oxford University, majoring in Arts which was my passion from a young age. Additionally, I have excellent presentation skills that will help me to explain to tourists confidently. Moreover, last summer I did an internship with a local furniture store which I used to work for very long hours and highly demanding customers. I am so excited for this opportunity. I will be ready to join on the 1st of June as my semester ends on the 15th May. This will give me a two weeks break as well as the museum will get busy by that time. I do not have any restrictions regarding the working days and hours except for Tuesdays I need have it as a holiday. Yours Faithfully, Alex
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my
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intereset
to work
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part time
at the Art National Museum as volunteer. The museum means a lot to me as I am a
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big
fan of arts since my childhood. I have always wanted to guide tourists and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
to them about paints and sculptures.

Currently
, I am in my second year at Oxford University, majoring in Arts which was my passion from a young age.
Additionally
, I have excellent presentation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
that will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
to tourists
confidently
.
Moreover
, last summer I did an internship with a local furniture store which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to work for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
long hours and
highly
demanding customers.

I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
excited for this opportunity. I will be ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
on the 1st of June as my semester ends on the 15th May. This will give me a two weeks break
as well
as the museum will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
busy by that time. I do not have any restrictions regarding the working days and hours
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
except for
Tuesdays I need have it as a holiday.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Alex
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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