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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express you gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express you gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir, 0AAy5
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express gratitude for provided once in a lifetime golden opportunity to work with you as a senior Brand Executive for the parental department of a pharmaceutical firm. I feel grateful to consider myself sufficient for a team member of your branding department as specially for pediatric parenteral medicine; however, I am currently working at zydus Cadila for in-house- marketing department for capsules and tables for south Africa. In addition to that I consider myself more accurate and precise in technical terms for this current segment only, likewise company rewards me anualay with good satisfying income and covering medical insurance too. So that, I consider myself much better and sutable to give staifying output as per requirements in current filed than offered by your company in term of pharmaceutical knowledge anexperiencexe wise. I hope you understand my concern for your offer and once again thank you for this precious opportunity! Yours faithfully, Anushree Raval
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express gratitude for provided once in a lifetime golden opportunity to work with you as a senior Brand Executive for the parental department of a pharmaceutical firm.

I feel grateful to consider myself sufficient for a team member of your branding department as
specially
for pediatric
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parenteral
medicine;
however
, I am
currently
working at
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zydus
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Cadila
for in-
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house
- marketing department for capsules and tables for
Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "South Africa"
south Africa
.

In addition
to that I consider myself more accurate and precise in technical terms for this
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current
segment
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only
,
likewise
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company
rewards me
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anualay
with
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good
satisfying income and covering medical insurance too.
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So
that, I consider myself much better and
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sutable
to give
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staifying
output as per requirements in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
filed than offered by your
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company
in term of pharmaceutical knowledge
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anexperiencexe
wise.

I hope you understand my concern for your offer and once again thank you for this precious opportunity!

Yours
faithfully
,

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Anushree
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Raval

IELTS letter You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express you gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

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  American English
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160 words
6.0
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