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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take kPA2
Hello Mr Khan, I am Anis Khan your neighbour in Appartment 105, I wanted to inform you that I had a sudden pipline burst in my appartment, and it has caused alot of Damage to my appartment. However I manage to stop the leakage myself but then I had to get concealed water lines replace with the new plastic lines. I want to apologise you on the disturbance caused by this issue, I am sure it was alot of sound coming out of my house during the last 2 days. It was an emergency thats why I coun't inform you before hand or else I would have informed you in advance. Thankfully most of work has been completed whereas small fixes still need to be done. I will ensure to get it done during the day time, so it does'nt bother anyones sleep. lastly I would like to thankyou for you understanding and patience. Regards, Your Neighbour AA
Hello Mr Khan,

I am
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Anis
Khan your
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neighbour
in
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Appartment
105, I wanted to inform you that I had a sudden
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pipline
burst in my
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appartment
, and it has caused
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alot
of Damage to my
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appartment
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
I manage to
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stop
the leakage myself
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but
then I had to
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get
concealed water lines replace with
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
the


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new
plastic lines.

I want to
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apologise
you on the disturbance caused by this issue, I am sure it was
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alot
of sound coming out of my
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house
during the last 2 days. It was an emergency
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thats
why I
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coun
't inform you
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before hand
or else I would have informed you in advance.
Thankfully
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most of work
has
been completed
whereas
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small
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fixes
still
need to
be done
. I will ensure to
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get
it done during the day time,
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so
it
Did you mean "doesn't"?
does'nt
bother
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anyones
sleep.

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lastly
I would like to
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thankyou
for you understanding and patience.

Regards,

Your
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Neighbour


AA

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
157 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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