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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . , 2OXA
Dear Guri, I received your letter today. I am glad you have finally taken an interest in Covid 19 situation in Canada because you never asked about recent events before. Prior to now, the Canadian government was unable to receive any vaccine for this deadly virus. Due to this, travel restrictions were implemented from last year which is going on till now. In this lockdown, no outside travel is allowed except any emergency and grocery shopping. However, a couple of weeks ago, health officials received their first shipment of covid 19 vaccination. everyone is really excited about this. The number of people who are suffering from homesickness, stress, and work-related problems because of this infectious disease finally gets the hope that everything will be fine soon. Moreover, My work was also suffered a lot in this lockdown and I am getting tired from working from home. Hope so this process of vaccinated the people going well. I really looking forward to catching up with you. With regards, harry
Dear
Guri
,

I received your letter
today
. I am glad you have
finally
taken an interest in
Covid 19
situation in Canada
because
you never asked about recent
events
before
.

Prior to
now
, the Canadian
government
was unable to receive any vaccine for this deadly virus. Due to this, travel restrictions
were implemented
from last year which is going on till
now
. In this lockdown,
no
outside travel is
allowed
except any emergency and grocery shopping.

However
, a couple of weeks ago, health officials received their
first
shipment of
covid 19
vaccination.
everyone
is
really
excited about this. The number of
people
who are suffering from homesickness,
stress
, and work-related problems
because of this
infectious disease
finally
gets
the hope that everything will be fine
soon
.

Moreover
, My work was
also
suffered a lot in this
lockdown and
I am getting tired from working from home. Hope
so
this process of vaccinated the
people
going well.

I
really
looking forward to catching up with you.

With regards,

harry
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IELTS letter You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . ,

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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