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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take PKld
Dear Jake, I am writing this letter regarding the issues I am facing after shifting to the accommodation owned by you here in Canada. I hate to complain but the dining table and closet are really in a bad shape and of no use to my family. As I had mentioned we are a family of 5 are the chairs provided are only 3 and the legs of those chair shake if anyone sits. It is really not safe for us to use them as it can hurt anyone. Also, the closet doors never close, as I believe the screws are not in place. Plus there is a sharp edge where my clothes get stuck every single time. I would kindly request you to help me in either replacing or buying new furniture. I also happened to see few chairs in a nearby store yesterday which is on discount till the weekend. But the closet seems okay to get fixed by a carpenter. It would be great if you could share any reference or perhaps visit tomorrow to resolve quickly. Yours Faithfully Prachi
Dear Jake,

I am writing this letter regarding the issues I am facing after shifting to the accommodation
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owned
by you here in Canada. I hate to complain
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but
the dining table and closet are
really
in a
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bad
shape and of no
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use
to my family.

As I had mentioned we are a family of 5 are the chairs provided are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
3 and the legs of those chair shake if anyone sits. It is
really
not safe for us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
them as it can hurt anyone.
Also
, the closet doors never close, as I believe the screws are not in place. Plus there is a sharp edge where my clothes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
stuck every single time.

I would kindly request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in either replacing or buying new furniture. I
also
happened to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
few chairs in a nearby store yesterday which is on discount till the weekend.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the closet seems okay to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
by a carpenter. It would be great if you could share any reference or perhaps visit tomorrow to resolve
quickly
.

Yours
Faithfully


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Prachi

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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  American English
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182 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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