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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties 7wYA
Dear Josh, Thank you for agreeing to look after my house and Manny, my pet dog while I am on holiday in Tuscany. I have made arrangements for a mobile phone while I'm in Tuscany so should you need to reach me, you can call me on 5543376. If for some reason, you can't reach me on this number, call the front desk of the hotel I'll be staying in. I'm booked in at the Hotel Meridien and the front desk number is 01-3467789. When you call, ask to be connected to room 505, that's the room I'll be staying in. If I'm out at the time, just leave a message and I'll call as soon as I get it. Concerning Manny, you know he's a spoiled baby. He only eats the Chow brand of dog food. I've stocked up with enough of it to last for the time I'll be away. His pacifier is on the top right shelf, near the cooker. You need to wash it at the end of every day. You also need to take him out on walks at least once a day, and you can let him round around the garden to expend energy. Remember to pay for gas and power. It'll run out on the 22nd of the month. That's in a week's time. I left the money on the kitchen counter. Also, remember to take out the trash every morning before 6. The dump truck rolls by latest 6. 30 a. m. , so you don't want to miss it. I am so relieved that you'll be looking after Manny and my house. I will definitely return this favor. Regards, Kimmy
Dear Josh,

Thank you for agreeing to look after my
house
and
Manny
, my pet dog while I am on holiday in Tuscany.

I have made arrangements for a mobile phone while I'm in Tuscany
so
should you need to reach me, you can
call
me on 5543376. If for
some
reason, you can't reach me on this number,
call
the front desk of the hotel I'll be staying in. I'm booked in at the Hotel
Meridien
and the front desk number is 01-3467789. When you
call
, ask to
be connected
to room 505, that's the room I'll be staying in. If I'm out at the time,
just
leave
a message and I'll
call
as
soon
as I
get
it.

Concerning
Manny
, you know he's a spoiled baby. He
only
eats the Chow brand of dog food. I've stocked up with
enough
of it to last for the time I'll be away. His pacifier is on the top right shelf, near the cooker. You need to wash it at the
end
of every day. You
also
need to take him out on walks at least once a day, and you can
let
him round around the garden to expend energy.

Remember to pay for gas and power. It'll run out on the 22nd of the month. That's in a week's time. I
left
the money on the kitchen counter.
Also
, remember to take out the trash every morning
before
6. The dump truck rolls by latest 6. 30 a. m.
,
so
you don't want to miss it.

I am
so
relieved that you'll be looking after
Manny
and my
house
. I will definitely return this favor.

Regards,

Kimmy
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
278 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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