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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take kDl2
Dear Rakesh, Hope you are doing good. I received a letter stating the trouble you had to go through because of the noise from our flat. The noise in the house was not intentional but a pure series of events which happens when there is a wedding in the family. Next week is my sister's wedding and everyone from the family has come over to celebrate and enjoy the moment. I believe you would have experienced too the emotions and fun which the entire family go through during the wedding season. The entire noise was because of the cultural events or ceremonies which are performed in a wedding. Let me first apologise as I should have notified you in advance and should have taken your consent but please consider this as one of those events which takes place once in many years and it is expected to enjoy the moment with the family and loved ones. We will try our level best to keep the noise level down and try utilising the club house more for future events. Sorry for all the trouble you had to go through in last few days. Thanking you, Yash
Dear Rakesh,

Hope you are doing
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good
. I received a letter stating the trouble you had to go through
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because
of the
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noise
from our flat. The
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noise
in the
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house
was not intentional
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but
a pure series of
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events
which happens when there is a wedding in the family.

Next
week is my sister's wedding and everyone from the family has
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come
over to celebrate and enjoy the moment. I believe you would have experienced
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too the
emotions and fun which the entire family go through during the wedding season. The entire
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noise
was
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because
of the cultural
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events
or ceremonies which
are performed
in a wedding.

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Let
me
first
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apologise
as I should have notified you in advance and should have taken your consent
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but
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please
consider this as one of those
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events
which takes place once in
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many
years and it is
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expected
to enjoy the moment with the family and
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loved
ones.

We will try our level best to
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keep
the
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noise
level down and try
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utilising
the club
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house
more for future
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events
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Sorry for all the trouble you had to go through in last few days.

Thanking you,

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Yash

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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