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friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there lAQ9
Dear Rahul, I am writing you this letter to congratulate you for the new job. I am very happy that you will be moving into this beautiful city of London. London is fantastic city to live in. I would recommend you to live near northern part of the city, as it would be make day to day commute easy and make it for accessible for other chores. Let me tell you more about the city's public transport. You can get around the city mainly through bus, train, or by bike. During peak times public transport are really crowded, so you might have to take walk. London is very social city. There's a lot of happening in this city during weekdays and weekends. I would recommend you to take look at all events happening in the city, Apart from that, you can even ask or join your work colleagues for social stuffs. Looking forward to seeing you, Rahul
Dear Rahul, I am writing you this letter to congratulate you for the new job. I am
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city of London
. London is fantastic city to
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I would recommend you to
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live
near northern part of the city, as it would be
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make
day to day commute easy and
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make
it for accessible for other chores.
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me
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tell
you more about the city's public transport. You can
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around the city
mainly
through bus, train, or by bike. During peak times public transport are
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really crowded
,
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you might
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take walk. London is
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very
social city. There's
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a lot of
happening in this city during weekdays and weekends. I would recommend you to take look at all
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events
happening in the city, Apart from that, you can even ask or
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join
your work colleagues for social stuffs.

Looking forward to seeing you, Rahul
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IELTS letter friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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