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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it mAYd
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you this letter as it came to my notice from my neighborhood that a developer is planning to build a shopping center near my home. I really love this idea but I am concerned about minor things. Let me explain to you in more detail. Our neighborhood for the time I know is a very quiet and serene area. The locality is known for park and other amenities. I feel like this idea of building a shopping centre will guest the problems. But from the other aspects, I do welcome this idea, because this will more jobs and prosperity under the roof. Although I welcome this plan, I have thought that people living in this neighborhood should know more in details about the shopping centre. Yours Faithfully
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing you this letter as it came to my notice from my neighborhood that a developer is planning to build a shopping center near my home. I
really
love
this
idea
but
I
am concerned
about minor things.

Let
me
explain
to you in more detail. Our neighborhood for the time I know is a
very
quiet and serene area. The locality
is known
for park and other amenities. I feel like this
idea
of building a shopping
centre
will guest the problems.
But
from the other aspects, I do welcome this
idea
,
because
this will more jobs and prosperity under the roof.

Although I welcome this plan, I have
thought
that
people
living in this neighborhood should know more in
details
about the shopping
centre
.

Yours
Faithfully
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IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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  American English
5 paragraphs
131 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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