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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you this letter as it came to my notice from my neighborhood that a developer is planning to build a shopping center near my home. I really love this idea but I am concerned about minor things. Let me explain to you in more detail. Our neighborhood for the time I know is a very quiet and serene area. The locality is known for park and other amenities. I feel like this idea of building a shopping centre will guest the problems. But from the other aspects, I do welcome this idea, because this will more jobs and prosperity under the roof. Although I welcome this plan, I have thought that people living in this neighborhood should know more in details about the shopping centre. Yours Faithfully

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing you this letter as it came to my notice from my neighborhood that a developer is planning to build a shopping center near my home. I really
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love
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idea
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but
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 about minor things.

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explain
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very
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idea
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idea
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because
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thought
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 living in this neighborhood should know more in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
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Yours Faithfully

IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

131 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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