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Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: State why you cannot go Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner Suggest another time to meet.

Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: State why you cannot go Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner Suggest another time to meet. dXj7
Dear Sam, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and best of spirit. The purpose of my letter is to apologize you for absence from your birthday Celebration. Let me explain my situation, On same day, Immediate cousin of mine got engaged. It was immensely essential event to attend. All the arrangements like choosing venue, Accommodation for guest, Dinner was put on me, Hence forgot to communicate you about it. I sincerely feel sorry for that. I am also thinking that as its all done we can meet some time in the light of get together for your belated birthday. We can have a feast at a nice place and chit chat. once again I express regret for not being able to make it up there. Time and venue can be decided telephonically. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly
Dear Sam, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and best of spirit. The purpose of my letter is to apologize you for absence from your birthday Celebration.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation, On same day, Immediate cousin of mine
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
engaged. It was
immensely
essential
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
to attend. All the arrangements like choosing venue, Accommodation for guest, Dinner
was put
on me,
Hence
forgot to communicate you about it. I
sincerely
feel sorry for that.

I am
also
thinking that as its all done we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time in the light of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together for your belated birthday. We can have a feast at a nice place and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
chit chat
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
once
again I express regret for not being able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it up there. Time and venue can
be decided
telephonically
. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
lovingly
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IELTS letter Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: State why you cannot go Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner Suggest another time to meet.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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