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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it 8kNl
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you this letter with a hope, if you could help me as I bought a camera of your company and I am missing some important items that come along. Let me explain to you my situation in more details. I bought this camera when i was travelling London for business purpose. This is a high resolution camera which comes with drone attached to it. According to user manual, the camera and drone is attached, but when I opened box I found out that the drone part was missing. Let me be clear that the box was sealed and I do have the invoice of the product. I request you if there is any way I could exchange it. Yours Faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you this letter with a hope, if you could
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bought
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camera
of your
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company and
I am missing
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important
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Let
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explain
to you my situation in more
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details
. I
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bought
this
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camera
when
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i
was travelling London for business purpose. This is a high resolution
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camera
which
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comes
with drone attached to it. According to user manual, the
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camera
and drone
is attached
,
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but
when I opened box I found out that the drone part was missing.
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Let
me be
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clear
that the box
was sealed
and I do have
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the invoice of
the product. I request you if there is any way I could exchange it. Yours
Faithfully
,

IELTS letter You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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