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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview You do NOT need to write any addresses. LVnn
Dear sir/Madam I am writing this letter about the advertisement you placed in the Toronto newspaper. I am 18 years old, a part-time student in college. I worked in the catering business during my holidays. The restaurant, where I am working, as a top waitress, is about close. I am now interested to apply for another position as a waitress. I have an extremely high energy level and multitask capacity which is essential for my career. In my current job, I am famous as an individual who has the most ability to tolerate and manage stressful situations. Flexibility, adaptability, and reliability are the most aspects of my personality. I would be grateful if I could be considered for the position. My manager is willing to supply a reference and I am available for an interview at any time except Monday and Wednesday which I have classes. Please do not hesitate to contact me by my telephone number 123214322 I look forward to hearing from you Sincerely, Raya Sadat
Dear sir/Madam

I am writing this letter about the advertisement you placed in the Toronto newspaper.

I am 18 years
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, a part-time student in college. I worked in the catering business during my holidays.

The restaurant, where I am working, as a top waitress, is about close.

I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
interested to apply for another position as a waitress.

I have an
extremely
high energy level and multitask capacity which is essential for my career.

In my
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current
job, I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
as an individual who has the most ability to tolerate and manage stressful situations.

Flexibility, adaptability, and reliability are the most aspects of my personality.

I would be grateful if I could
be considered
for the position.

My manager is willing to supply a
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reference and
I am available for an interview at any time except Monday and Wednesday which I have classes.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do not hesitate to contact me by my telephone number 123214322

I look forward to hearing from you

Sincerely
,

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Sadat
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IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
11 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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