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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter  explain the reasons for the noise  apologise  describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter  explain the reasons for the noise  apologise  describe what action you will take jkmL
Dear neighbours, This is Vivek Shah who is residing in your wing, in flat number 101. This is an apologetic letter against a response to a former complaint received regarding the unpleasant noise coming from our apartment. There were frequent oral complaints by you all and today I received a written warning regarding it. I am a professional musician and me along with my other colleagues frequently practice for various events at home especially during the evenings. It is often that the practice lasts beyond midnight when the surrounding is calm, the noise is easily audible to nearby houses. It is my earnest and kindest request for you to accept my apology for this act and I sincerely apologize for not considering the disturbing effect it might create. I will assure you all that I will take certain steps to minimize its impact. It is possible to reduce the sound to an acceptable decibel which would not significantly impact our neighbourhood. Moreover, I will restrict my practice sessions to midnight and make sure it would not extend beyond this time limit. It is my sincere request for you to accept my apology and give me a chance to improve my carelessness. Yours sincerely,
Dear
neighbours
,

This is Vivek Shah who is residing in your wing, in flat number 101. This is
an


apologetic letter against a response to a former complaint received regarding the

unpleasant
noise coming from our apartment.

There were frequent oral complaints by you all and
today
I received a written

warning
regarding it. I am a professional musician and me along with my
other


colleagues
frequently
practice for various
events
at home
especially
during the

evenings
. It is
often
that the practice lasts beyond midnight when the surrounding
is


calm
, the noise is
easily
audible to nearby
houses
.

It is my earnest and kindest request for you to accept my apology for this act and I

sincerely
apologize for not considering the disturbing effect it might create. I
will


assure
you all that I will take certain steps to minimize its impact. It is possible
to


reduce
the sound to an acceptable decibel which would not
significantly
impact our

neighbourhood
.
Moreover
, I will restrict my practice sessions to midnight and
make


sure
it would not extend beyond this time limit.

It is my sincere request for you to accept my apology and give me a chance to

improve
my carelessness.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter  explain the reasons for the noise  apologise  describe what action you will take

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