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Write a letter to the restaurant manager in your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebrationsay what was good about the food and service

Write a letter to the restaurant manager in your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebrationsay what was good about the food and service LPMR

Dear sir/ madam I am writing to you to express my delight as I came to the restaurant on 21 January for my cousin's birthday celebrationMy mother father and my daughter. since the party was started I was little amenable to joinWhen I was enter the party the seating arrangements are augsome. Even though we were the distance relationship but he concern is augsome in order that that our family is vegetarian little igregious. when I tasted the meals it was augsome and the decoration is art full. The service is use and friendly. it was under forgatable place for meThank you

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celebrationMy
 mother father and my daughter. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSince
since
 the party was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 amenable to Possible spelling mistake found.joinedjointedjoiner
joinWhen
 I was Consider using a past participle here: "entered".entered
enter
 the party the seating arrangements are Possible spelling mistake found.awesomefulsomeautosome
augsome
. Even though
 we were the distance relationship This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'he'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
he concern
 is Possible spelling mistake found.awesomefulsomeautosome
augsome
 in order that that our family is vegetarian This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
Possible spelling mistake found.egregious
igregious
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 I tasted the meals it was Possible spelling mistake found.awesomefulsomeautosome
augsome
 and the decoration is art full. The service is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 and friendly. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 was under Possible spelling mistake found.forgettableforgivable
forgatable
 place for Possible spelling mistake found.methane
meThank
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphyou.you!you?you:you,you;
you

IELTS letter Write a letter to the restaurant manager in your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebrationsay what was good about the food and service

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

101 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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