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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take. GKXm
Dear John, I am writing this letter to you to express my apologies. Unfortunately, I could not continue the evening's part-time course due to some demanding circumstances in my job. Let me explain my situation in detail. As the business operations in my current organization increased exponentially, additional hours of focus needed. Furthermore, the new branch had a critical requirement in the field of specialization, where I have graduated from. If I do not spend additional time, I could lose a great opportunity in my professional career. Coincidentally, evening classes had an over-lap with those new responsibilities. To conclude, I wanted to know, would it be possible to suspend the course temporarily for a quarter? So that, I can complete my ongoing full-time work and resume later in the 2nd half of the academic year. I am looking forward to your final review and suggestion. Yours sincerely, Naga Seshu
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to you to express my apologies. Unfortunately, I could not continue the evening's part-time course due to
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some
demanding circumstances in my job.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in detail. As the business operations in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
organization increased
exponentially
, additional hours of focus needed.
Furthermore
, the new branch had a critical requirement in the field of specialization, where I have graduated from. If I do not spend additional time, I could lose a great opportunity in my professional career.
Coincidentally
, evening classes had an over-lap with those new responsibilities.

To conclude
, I wanted to know, would it be possible to suspend the course
temporarily
for a quarter?
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that, I can complete my ongoing full-time work and resume later in the 2nd half of the academic year. I am looking forward to your final review and suggestion.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Naga
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Seshu
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take.

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