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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take 7blA
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to inform you that i won't be able to persue my language classes from tomorrow onwards. My office timings have changed as such the class timings are clashing the work hours. Let me explain the situation in detail; Earlier, my official timing was 9 am to 6 pm but due to recent changes in the client's requirement, my working hours has changed to 11am to 8 pm. As the language course commense at 7 pm, it would be impossible for me to join it in the scheduled timing. Although, I will be able to attend one hour out of two hours evening classes, but it won't really help me as I will miss half of the teachings. While I am suspending the classes for now, I am also planning to rejoin the session after two months when my official hours will be back to normal. Consequently, learing from where I stopped. I would be grateful to you for your consideration. Hoping to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Ankita
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to inform you that
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won't be able to
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persue
my language
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classes
from tomorrow onwards. My office timings have
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changed
as such the
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class
timings are clashing the work hours.

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me
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explain
the situation in detail; Earlier, my official
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timing
was 9 am to 6 pm
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but
due to recent
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changes
in the client's requirement, my working
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hours
has
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changed
to 11am to 8 pm. As the language course
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commense
at 7 pm, it would be impossible for me to
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join
it in the scheduled
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timing
. Although, I will be able to attend one
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hour
out of two
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hours
evening
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classes
,
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but
it won't
really
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help
me as I will miss half of the teachings.

While I am suspending the
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classes
for
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now
, I am
also
planning to rejoin the session after two months when my official
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hours
will be back to normal.
Consequently
,
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learing
from where I
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stopped
.

I would be grateful to you for your consideration.

Hoping to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully


Ankita
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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7 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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