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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation DOxW
Dear Sir, Couple of weeks ago, The renowed magazine “Tourist Guide” published. It was edition of 250th. I am writing this letter to inform you that an article about my hometown in which contained some wrong information. My name is Rinkal Makasana. I am writer and read the whole article. I appriciate to get noble of your publication. but some information is crucial about in bird sectuary at my home town. It see month of April for visit instead of starting November is best time for tourist attrection. It is mandatory to change information because my city is heritage city. Mariad foreigner fascinated due to this period. Moreover, numourse birds drawn to this season because it is peak winter. Consequently, touriest study the journal data and they misguided. I humbly requesting you to correct information republish it in your future prints. To addition, please give some notes to correct facts so reader know right data. I am looking forward to a quick resolve to this important matter. Yours Faithfully, Rinkal Makasana
Dear Sir,

Couple of weeks ago, The
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magazine “Tourist Guide” published. It was edition of 250th. I am writing this letter to inform you that an article about my hometown in which contained
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some
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wrong
information.

My name is
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Rinkal
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Makasana
. I am writer and read the whole article. I
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appriciate
to
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get
noble of your publication.
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but
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some
information is crucial about in bird
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sectuary
at my home town. It
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see
month of April for visit
instead
of starting November
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is best
time for tourist
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attrection
. It is mandatory to
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change
information
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because
my city is heritage city.
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Mariad
foreigner fascinated due to this period.
Moreover
,
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numourse
birds drawn to this season
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because
it is peak winter.
Consequently
,
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touriest
study the journal data and they misguided.

I
humbly
requesting you to correct information republish it in your future prints.
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To
addition,
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please
give
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some
notes to correct facts
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so
reader know right data.

I am looking forward to a quick resolve to this
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important
matter.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Rinkal
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Makasana

IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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7 paragraphs
170 words
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