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There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend - explain what happens at the party - describe the tradition and why it is important in your country - say why it is important for your friend to be there

There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend - explain what happens at the party - describe the tradition and why it is important in your country - say why it is important for your friend to be there V3J6
Dear Rob, I hope this letter find you in well. It's been quite long time now we have spoken. I couldn't be able to forget our meeting last year in your country. I also remeber you expressed interest to visit my village in Kerala. Here the spring season just started and it would be full of festival and happiness for next few months. I would like to invite you to my home to celebrate our national festival called ONAM. Onam is traditionally celebrated at the time of harvest. And there is an interesting story which ancient people believes the king called Mahabali he came to earth for visiting his people. During this festival we all buy new clothes, make delicious feast at home and arrange different traditional dances and competetions. India is a diverse country but we believe unity in diversity. So Onam brings unity in our culture. Hence I would like to invite you at this time to be part of this great occasion. It would bring cherish your memories ever in your life. Yours lovingly Tom
Dear Rob, I hope this letter find you in well. It's been quite long time
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we have spoken. I couldn't be able to forget our meeting last year in your country. I
also
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remeber
you expressed interest to visit my village in Kerala. Here
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the spring season
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just
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started
and it would be full of festival and happiness for
next
few months. I would like to invite you to my home to celebrate our national festival called
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ONAM
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Onam
is
traditionally
celebrated at the time of harvest. And there is an interesting story which ancient
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people
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believes
the king called
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Mahabali
he came to earth for visiting his
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people
. During this festival we all
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buy
new clothes,
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make
delicious feast at home and arrange
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different
traditional dances and
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competetions
. India is a diverse country
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but
we believe unity in diversity.
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So
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Onam
brings unity in our culture.
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Hence
I would like to invite you at this time to be part of this great occasion. It would bring cherish your memories ever in your life. Yours
lovingly
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Tom
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IELTS letter There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend - explain what happens at the party - describe the tradition and why it is important in your country - say why it is important for your friend to be there

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