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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take egJB
Dear Mr. Gonzales, I am writing to let you know that I received the letter of complaint about the inconvenience that you had to experience. But more important is that I apologise about the noise that is coming from my place and I will try to keep it down. Let me explain my situation. I am actually refurnishing the whole kitchen including the floor tiles. This is a very difficult task for me to do by myself so I hired a construction worker who promised that it will be done within a day. However, the delivery of the furniture got late due to some reasons which made me have to wait for it to continue. Would you kindly bear with me for two more days? I promise there won't be a next time. I will always have your consent first before I make some serious decisions when it comes to ideas that will end up with some problems. I hope you will consider my matter favourably. Thank you for your patience. Best Regards, Harmandeep Brar
Dear Mr. Gonzales,

I am writing to
let
you know that I received the letter of complaint about the inconvenience that you had to experience.
But
more
important
is that I
apologise
about the noise
that is
coming from my place and I will try to
keep
it down.

Let
me
explain
my situation. I am actually refurnishing the whole kitchen including the floor tiles. This is a
very
difficult task for me to do by myself
so
I hired a construction worker who promised that it will
be done
within a day.
However
, the delivery of the furniture
got
late due to
some
reasons which made me
have to
wait for it to continue.

Would you kindly bear with me for two more days? I promise there won't be a
next
time. I will always have your consent
first
before
I
make
some
serious decisions when it
comes
to
ideas
that will
end
up with
some
problems.
I
hope you will consider my matter
favourably
.

Thank you for your patience.

Best Regards,

Harmandeep
Brar
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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