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You are organising a graduation party for your class and you want to book a restaurant. Write a letter to the manager of your favourite restaurant. In the letter: explain the reason for the party and the date and time it will be held describe some particular food you would like to be served say how many people will be attending and what their dietary requirements are

You are organising a graduation party for your class and you want to book a restaurant. Write a letter to the manager of your favourite restaurant. In the letter: explain the reason for the party and the date and time it will be held describe some particular food you would like to be served say how many people will be attending and what their dietary requirements are BKJa
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you in regard to the graduation party for my class and I would like to book your restaurant for 28th March on Monday, whereas the party will be start at sharp 11 o’clock in the morning. I chose this day and time as it is suitable specifically for everyone those are coming to this party. In regard to the food, it would be great if there are particularly south Indian dishes, whereas people like to have continental dishes too because students in this graduation are from different states as a result their choice of food is also different from each other. So, in order to make them feel more joyful it is necessary to have proper arrangements according to everybody’s needs. I would like to inform you that about 150 people will be attending this graduation party to celebrate this memorable day to have memories with their friends, while in regard to food they will mostly like vegetarian food, however it must be spicy. Hope you got all the information and reply me soon regarding this. Yours Sincerely Ryan
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to you in regard to the graduation party for my
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class
and I would like to book your restaurant for 28th March on Monday, whereas the party will be
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start
at sharp 11 o’clock in the morning. I chose this day and time as it is suitable
specifically
for everyone those are coming to this party.

In regard to the
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food
, it would be great if there are
particularly
south Indian dishes, whereas
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people
like to have continental dishes too
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because
students in this graduation are from
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different
states
as a result
their choice of
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food
is
also
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different
from each other.
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So
, in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them feel more joyful it is necessary to have proper arrangements according to everybody’s needs.

I would like to inform you that about 150
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will be attending this graduation party to celebrate this memorable day to have memories with their friends, while in regard to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
they will
mostly
like vegetarian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
,
however
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be spicy. Hope you
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got
all the information and reply me
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soon
regarding this.

Yours
Sincerely


Ryan
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IELTS letter You are organising a graduation party for your class and you want to book a restaurant. Write a letter to the manager of your favourite restaurant. In the letter: explain the reason for the party and the date and time it will be held describe some particular food you would like to be served say how many people will be attending and what their dietary requirements are

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186 words
6.5
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