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You are planning to pursue your tertiary studies abroad. Write a letter to your freind. Explain him your plan. Tell him why did you choose that college. Ask him to give you some information about it.

You are planning to pursue your tertiary studies abroad. Write a letter to your freind. Explain him your plan. Tell him why did you choose that college. Ask him to give you some information about it. yoal

Dear Mary, Hello! It was so long that I haven't written to you due to busy schedule. I hope you're doing well and enjoying your stay in Lancaster in England. I'd like to tell you know that I'm thinking to apply to a Master business administration course(. MBA) at Imperial College business school of Locaster. I 'd like to inform you also that I got my bachelor degree in business and management last month. In parallel of my university studies, I have worked as a family campagny manager with my father. It was really a huge experience for me to substantiate the whole knowledge I learnt throughout the last three years. Let me tell you too, that I havee done many researches before choosing this college. I have found a lot of motivated détails such as the low registration fees compared to the whole European universities. Additionally, the MBA obtained from this institution would be most profitable for the students ' carriers. Not to mention that they will be the best paid than their counterparts around the world. If it doesn' t bother you, I ask you to collect me some information about this course by contacting the college administative personal who can provide you important details about the period and the type of the course within it 's a part or a full time course. Besides to the fees I must pay, the accommodation and transport means availability in the city. I will have to extend my heartfelt thanks if you help me to reach my target. Best wishesSelma

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