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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take xnVo
Dear Ms. Houston, I am writing to let you know that it has been an honor to be in your class. However, I am facing a huge problem with my time management between work and evening classes so I have decided not to continue with my part time evening courses. Let me explain my situation. I need some money to be able to pay all my expenses I am definitely prioritizing my job more than studies. In addition, I thought it will be easy for me to refresh after work but I was wrong instead I've been missing classes and begun submitting everything late. Would you kindly give me a break for awhile? It is not easy for me to let go my dream program with the outcome of being a professional nurse. I hope you will consider this matter favourably. Hope to see you again next semester. Best wishes, Harmandeep K. Brar
Dear Ms. Houston,

I am writing to
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let
you know that it has been an honor to be in your
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class
.
However
, I am facing a huge problem with my time management between work and evening classes
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so
I have decided not to continue with my
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part time
evening courses.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation. I need
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some
money to be able to pay all my expenses I am definitely prioritizing my job more than studies.
In addition
, I
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thought
it will be easy for me to refresh after work
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but
I was
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wrong
instead
I've been missing classes and begun submitting everything late.

Would you kindly give me a break for
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awhile
? It is not easy for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
go my dream program with the outcome of being a professional nurse. I hope you will consider this matter
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favourably
.

Hope to
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see
you again
next
semester.

Best wishes,

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Harmandeep
K.
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Brar

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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  American English
7 paragraphs
152 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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