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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Sharma, I writing to express my sincere apologies about the noises coming from my flat recently. I received your complaint letter from the building manager yesterday and I was so embarrassed. I would like to explain to you the situation. It was my child's 1st birthday on the 30th of December, and we wanted to celebrate it with our friends and family. We were so excited to see everyone as it was a long time we did not see each other. We stayed up the whole night and were dancing and singing cherishing the moments together. I really apologise for the inconvenience caused to you as we didn't realize at that time about the trouble we were giving you because of the high music and our late night singing. I promise you that the next time when we have our friends coming over, we will make sure that it doesn't cause you any issue. We will keep our voice and the music volume ow so that you will be able to get a decent sleep. My deep apologies to you again. Yours sincerely, Shilakha

Dear Mr Sharma,

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 to express my sincere apologies about the noises coming from my flat recently.

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so
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so
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apologise
 for the inconvenience caused to you as we didn't realize at that time about the trouble we were giving you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the high music and our late night singing. I promise you that the next
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make
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keep
 our voice and the music volume ow This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you will be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a decent sleep.

My deep apologies to you again.

Yours sincerely
,

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Shilakha