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Motivation letter for stipendium Hungaricum

Dear Sir/Madam I have read the information about the Bachelor in Biochemical & Chemical Engineering study program with great interest on your website. Through this motivational letter, I would like to put forward my candidacy for enrolment in this course. Ever since I was a little girl, watching my parents help people cope with their illnesses, I had a lot of questions that, unfortunately, no one could answer in detail. After a while, all the answers started coming to me, and I, in turn, continued to learn about humanity at the molecular level about its vulnerabilities to disease, and its healing paths. In parallel with this passion, for the last two years, I have been interested in designing and modeling in 3D format, torn between these areas. Finally, I found the perfect combination of the two spheres in the biochemical and chemical engineering program. To be a good candidate, only interest in a chosen cause is not enough, so we would like to emphasize the acquired skills that can be the basis for success in the chosen field. For example, through a scientific project that has won prize places in school and national competitions, knowledge, and interest in biochemical engineering can be confirmed. Participation and honorary awards at international conferences, the UN model shows critical thinking, analysis, and syntax of problems at the global level. Speech and communication are equally important. Because the key thing is not just to get the knowledge, but to be able to share it, to help solve the worldwide problems. At present, there are many incurable infectious diseases, one of which is AIDS. The baccalaureate program in this area will provide a foundation of knowledge that will help to continue with the master's and doctoral programs in the direction of pharmacology. Moreover, the following discoveries of new drugs will be based on this knowledge. In addition to academic knowledge, this program is an ideal opportunity for a cultural exchange due to the large number of international students. There may be difficulties with the state language, but I think we can study the base before we start, and when we get there, it will be easier to continue the study with the speakers. Moreover, thanks to the close historical ties between Kazakhstan and Hungary, that country was close in spirit, and not only was it the most suitable country for training, and in the future that training would help to strengthen diplomatic relations between the countries. When returning to the homeland, it aims to fight against infectious diseases, to develop new drugs with minimal side effects, to help people fight for happiness and, above all, healthy lives. I hope I have convinced you of my superior abilities and passionate motivation to start studying biochemical and chemical engineering in Hungary. I’m looking forward to hearing from you and starting your studies in your country! Kind regards
Dear Sir/Madam

I have read the information about the Bachelor in Biochemical & Chemical
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Engineering
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study
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program
with great interest on your website. Through this motivational letter, I would like to put forward my candidacy for
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enrolment
in this course.

Ever since I was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
girl, watching my parents
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help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
cope with their illnesses, I had
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a lot of
questions that, unfortunately, no one could answer in detail. After a while, all the answers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
coming to me, and I, in turn, continued to learn about humanity at the molecular level about its vulnerabilities to disease, and its healing paths. In parallel with this passion, for the last two years, I have
been interested
in designing and modeling in 3D format, torn between these areas.
Finally
, I found the perfect combination of the two spheres in the biochemical and chemical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
engineering
program.

To be a
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good
candidate,
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only
interest in a chosen cause is not
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enough
,
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so
we would like to emphasize the acquired
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
that can be the basis for success in the chosen field.
For example
, through a scientific project that has won prize places in school and national competitions,
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knowledge
, and interest in biochemical
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engineering
can
be confirmed
. Participation and honorary awards at international conferences, the UN model
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shows
critical thinking, analysis, and syntax of problems at the global level. Speech and communication are
equally
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important
.
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Because
the key thing is not
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just
to
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get
the
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knowledge
,
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but
to be able to share it, to
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help
solve the worldwide problems.

At present, there are
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many
incurable infectious diseases, one of which is AIDS. The baccalaureate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
program
in this area will provide a foundation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
that will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
to continue with the master's and doctoral
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
programs
in the direction of pharmacology.
Moreover
, the following discoveries of new drugs will
be based
on this knowledge.

In addition
to academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
program
is an ideal opportunity for a cultural exchange due to the large number of international students. There may be difficulties with the state language,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I
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think
we can
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study
the base
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before
we
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start
, and when we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
there, it will be easier to continue the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
with the speakers.
Moreover
, thanks to the close historical ties between Kazakhstan and Hungary, that country was close in spirit, and not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
was it the most suitable country for training, and in the future that training would
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
to strengthen diplomatic relations between the countries.

When returning to the homeland, it aims to fight against infectious diseases, to develop new drugs with minimal side effects, to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
fight for happiness and,
above all
, healthy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
.

I hope I have convinced you of my superior abilities and passionate motivation to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
studying biochemical and chemical
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engineering
in Hungary. I’m looking forward to hearing from you and starting your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
in your country!

Kind regards
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IELTS letter Motivation letter for stipendium Hungaricum

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
478 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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