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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice about living in your country.

Dear john Hope you’re doing well, I'm excited to hear that you will move to my city for work. There have (in the city) various facilities you will be surprised, usually, there have a big waterfall & a big river which is the name Padma River. Some local Street shops you can buy anything from there as well as vegetable & fish. As well as in the market has a big traditional restaurant ‘the la vila’ you can buy there Asian, Italian, Spanish food even most people prefer traditional eats. Which is very interesting in our city. The city most famous for the transportation system there is an available train & some local buses, But the majority of wealthy people used to helicopter. you can meet new people from the local garden, the everyday morning they walking there for physical exercise, even some of the people active with social media you can expand them, they very friendly. Hope to see you soon.
Dear john

Hope you’re doing well, I'm excited to hear that you will
move
to my city for work.

There have (in the city) various facilities you will
be surprised
,
usually
, there have a
big
waterfall & a
big
river which is the name
Padma
River.
Some
local Street shops you can
buy
anything from there
as well
as vegetable & fish.
As well
as in the market has a
big
traditional restaurant ‘the la
vila
’ you can
buy
there Asian, Italian, Spanish food even most
people
prefer traditional eats.
Which
is
very
interesting
in our city. The city most
famous
for the transportation system there is an available train &
some
local buses,
But
the majority of wealthy
people
used
to helicopter.
you
can
meet
new
people
from the local garden, the everyday morning
they walking
there for physical exercise, even
some of the
people
active with social media you can expand them, they
very
friendly.

Hope to
see
you
soon
.
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He/she has asked you for advice about living in your country.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
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