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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Get contact details for when you are away. • Give instructions about how to care for your pet. • Describe other household duties

Dear Mary, I would like to thank you for being kind enough to take the responsibility of looking after my house and pet. Meanwhile I am on holidays, you can reach me out on my WhatsApp number +973-526962333 or Email me at ‘maielo@gmail. com’. In case I am not available you can contact my neighbor ‘Anna’ – Contact details +97359522256, I will hand over the keys to her. She is already informed about you coming over to my place during my holidays. My pet’s name is ‘Whistle’ and he is a Persian cat, he likes to play alone with rubber toys that already kept in his space, so he won’t bother you much. He takes three meals a day – Chicken dry snack in the morning, Fish wet snack in the afternoon and in the evening as well, All the food is stocked up in the kitchen drawer labelled as ‘Whistle Food Storage’. Please take him out after the second meal for the quick walk in the neighborhood. Regarding some household chores, I prefer you do it twice per week – every Sunday and Wednesday that includes the basic to-dos like cleaning floor, washing dishes and clothes. You can reach me out anytime you need, I will be glad to assist you regarding anything. Let me know what would you like me to bring for you from Miami. Hope to see you soon once I am back home.
Dear Mary,

I would like to thank you for being kind
enough
to take the responsibility of looking after my
house
and pet.
Meanwhile
I am on holidays, you can reach me out on my WhatsApp number +973-526962333 or Email me at ‘
maielo@gmail
.
com
’. In case I am not available you can contact my neighbor ‘Anna’
Contact
details
+97359522256, I will hand over the keys to her. She is already informed about you coming over to my place during my holidays.

My pet’s name is ‘Whistle’ and he is a Persian cat, he likes to play alone with rubber toys that already
kept
in his space,
so
he won’t bother you much. He takes three meals a day
Chicken dry snack in the morning, Fish wet snack in the afternoon and in the evening
as well
, All the food
is stocked
up in the kitchen drawer labelled as ‘Whistle Food Storage’.
Please
take him out after the second meal for the quick walk in the neighborhood.

Regarding
some
household chores, I prefer you do it twice per week
every Sunday and Wednesday that includes the basic to-dos like cleaning floor, washing dishes and clothes.

You can reach me out anytime you need, I will be glad to assist you regarding anything.
Let
me know what would you like me to bring for you from Miami. Hope to
see
you
soon
once I am back home.
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Get contact details for when you are away. • Give instructions about how to care for your pet. • Describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
238 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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