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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir/ Madam I would like to appreciate to this occasion that offered by the museum. I am aiming to be a part of this volunteer job that advertised on Cultural Heritage website. It is worth mentioning as an archaeologist graduate, being a historian in Art History Museum, would be an opportunity to implement my skills in the museum. Moreover, such an interesting prospect would be an incredible feat to personal growth. Also, getting this condition steering me a possibility to make a dated archive for exhibition, relying on my new research. In order to refer to my previous experiences, I was one of the restoration experts in the Persepolis Museum for 2 years, additionally, I'm a researcher in the official scientific journal of cultural heritage. For more information on my CV, you will have the occasion to find in the file attached. The idea of volunteering, given me great motivation to be a candidate hence, I'm available every weekday afternoon at 3 p. m. to 8. Also, can be ready on Tuesday and Wednesday at 9 a. m. to 13. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours Faithfully, Mr PADASH.
Dear Sir/ Madam

I would like to appreciate to this occasion that offered by the
museum
. I am aiming to be a part of this volunteer job that advertised on Cultural Heritage website. It is worth mentioning as an archaeologist graduate, being a historian in Art History
Museum
, would be an opportunity to implement my
skills
in the
museum
.
Moreover
, such an interesting prospect would be an incredible feat to personal growth.
Also
, getting this condition steering me a possibility to
make
a dated archive for exhibition, relying on my new research.

In order to refer to my previous experiences, I was one of the restoration experts in the Persepolis
Museum
for 2 years,
additionally
, I'm a researcher in the official scientific journal of cultural heritage. For more information on my CV, you will have the occasion to find in the file attached.

The
idea
of volunteering,
given
me great motivation to be a candidate
hence
, I'm available every weekday afternoon at 3 p. m. to 8.
Also
, can be ready on Tuesday and Wednesday at 9 a. m. to 13.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Mr
PADASH
.
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

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