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You are staying in an alien country. You have recently received a letter from your wife in which she has complained of your son's activities. Write a letter to your son to counsel him. In your letter, write: . what you came to know about his behaviour why you are upset about such activities . what kind of behaviour you are expecting from him

Dear Jon, Hope You Are Doing Well, I Am Writing This Letter To Express My Disappointment From YourBehavior, Your Mother Wrote A Letter To Me And Told About Your Mischievous Habits. this Is Unexpected To Know That You Are Not Concentrating On Your Studies And Your Are More Into Parties And Sports. As You Know I Am Working Far From You All To Give You Best Life And To Save Money For Your Higher Studies, Me And Your Mother Had Planned To Sent You In Hallmark University For Your Further Studies, If You Did Not Get Good Marks, It Is NotPossible For You To Get Admission In Such Ranked University And Also It Is Not Worth For Me To Live Far From You, If You Don't Want To Cooperate With Me. I Really Want You To Concentrate On Your Studies From Now Although I Am Not Stopping You To Go Out With Your Friends Or To Play But It Should Be In Limits From Now. As A Parent Desire You To Successful In Your Life And Achieve Goals. I Feel That You Will Understand And Workhard From Now. Yours Lovingly, Jay
Dear Jon,

Hope You Are Doing Well, I Am Writing This Letter To Express My Disappointment From
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YourBehavior
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Told
About Your Mischievous Habits.
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Is Unexpected
To Know That You Are Not Concentrating On Your
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Studies
And
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Your Are
More Into Parties And Sports.

As You Know I Am Working Far From You All To Give You Best Life And To Save Money For Your Higher
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Studies
, Me And Your Mother Had Planned

To
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Sent
You In Hallmark University For Your
Further
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Studies
, If You Did Not
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Get
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Good
Marks, It Is
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For You To
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Get
Admission In Such Ranked University And
Also
It Is Not Worth For Me To
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Live
Far From You, If You Don't Want To Cooperate With Me.

I
Really
Want You To Concentrate On Your
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Studies
From
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Now
Although I Am Not Stopping You To Go Out With Your Friends Or To Play
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But
It Should Be In Limits From
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Now
. As A Parent Desire You To Successful In Your Life And Achieve Goals. I Feel That You Will Understand And
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Workhard
From
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Now
.

Yours
Lovingly
,

Jay
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IELTS letter You are staying in an alien country. You have recently received a letter from your wife in which she has complained of your son's activities. Write a letter to your son to counsel him. In your letter, write: . what you came to know about his behaviour why you are upset about such activities. what kind of behaviour you are expecting from him

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  American English
6 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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