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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, We are ones of the residents living in District 5. We are glad to help the sports contest of the community. Especially when considering the offering award, we are honored to propose Hellen to receive the great award of contribution. The contest was held on Dec 25, 2020 in the center of our community. Suddenly, the male referee was seriously injured due to an unintentional strike by a player when the soccer match was going on. We had not prepared a supplementary one but luckily a person in the audience stepped out to replace the referee to continue the game. That hero is Hellen who has been one of female referees of our community. Thanks to her, the match ended successfully. In the upcoming awards ceremony, we suggest the newspaper offering an award to Hellen who contributed to the contest completed. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, Luc To
Dear Sir or Madam,

We are ones of the residents living in District 5. We are glad to
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help
the sports contest of the community.
Especially
when considering the offering
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award
, we
are honored
to propose
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Hellen
to receive the great
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award
of contribution.

The contest
was held
on Dec 25, 2020 in the center of our community.
Suddenly
, the male referee was
seriously
injured due to an unintentional strike by a player when the soccer match was going on. We had not prepared a supplementary one
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but
luckily a person in the audience stepped out to replace the referee to continue the game. That hero is
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Hellen
who has been one of female referees of our community. Thanks to her, the match ended
successfully
.

In the upcoming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
awards
ceremony, we suggest the newspaper offering an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
award
to
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Hellen
who contributed to the contest completed.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Luc
To

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.