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A year ago, you lent your favorite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it .The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother. Write a letter to your friend in the letter : -Askhow is she doing -Remind him/Her about the book = Explain why you need it back

Dear Eric, It’s been a really long time since I have received any mail or message from your end. I hope this letter find you in good health and best of spirits. How are you, Martha and Nancy I really wish to meet you and spend some quality time with you guys in New Zealand. I Have recently joined the giant hotel chain in India as an senior chef, which reminds me are you still taking cooking classes. I wish I could be an passionate reader like you during college days which reminds me Have You finish the book “The art of cooking by Sanjeev kapoor “that you borrowed from me about a year ago and If you could please return it if you are done with reading and I hope it helped you a lot and might help you with some old authentic recipes and knowledge about Indian spices. The book was gifted by my grandmother on my birthday when I turned 14. The book plays a special place in my heart after the loss of my grandma and would write to re read the book again This book is a reminder of her who had been a loving personality and an idol in my teenage. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I did. I would really appreciate if you can return the book via the postal service at your convenience. If you are yet to finish it, send me after you read it. Why don't you visit us sometime during the summer vacation? We would be glad to have you at our home. With lots of love, Manjeet
Dear Eric,

It’s been a
really
long time since I have received any mail or message from your
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end
. I hope this letter find you in
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good
health and best of spirits. How are you, Martha and Nancy I
really
wish to
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meet
you and spend
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some
quality time with you guys in New Zealand.

I Have recently
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joined
the giant hotel chain in India as
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an
senior chef, which reminds me are you
still
taking cooking classes. I wish I could be
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an
passionate reader like you during college days which reminds me Have You finish the
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book
“The art of cooking by Sanjeev
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kapoor
“that you borrowed from me about a year ago and If you could
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please
return it if you
are done
with reading and I hope it
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helped
you a lot and might
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help
you with
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some
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old
authentic recipes and knowledge about Indian spices.

The
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book
was gifted
by my grandmother on my birthday when I turned 14. The
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book
plays a special place in my heart after the loss of my grandma and would write to re read the
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book
again This
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book
is a reminder of her who had been a loving personality and an idol in my teenage. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I did. I would
really
appreciate if you can return the
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book
via the postal service at your convenience. If you are
yet
to finish it,
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send
me after you read it.

Why don't you visit us sometime during the summer vacation? We would be glad to have you at our home.

With lots of
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love
,

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Manjeet

IELTS letter A year ago, you lent your favorite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it. The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother. Write a letter to your friend in the letter: -Askhow is she doing -Remind him/Her about the book = Explain why you need it back

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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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