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You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people to help renovate the building and also help with some activities. Write a letter to the principal and say how would you be able to help? When and why would you do it? Who will help you to do it?

Dear Mrs Azeezat Akinde, Upon my visiti to the local shop I noticed the building needs some renovations, I would love to help thereby putting some things in place by providing a platform where we can reach out to people who would help with funds in buying some building materials for renovation. I will be looking at first week of January which is an ideal time considering that most salary earners on the alumni platform must have been paid thier salaries and would be able to reach and donate to the building project. Morealso some executives from the alumnia unit would also put and create awareness to some donors to ensure the project kick starts as soon as possible. Thank you for your time. Yours Sincerely, Rita Okologume.
Dear Mrs
Azeezat
Akinde
,

Upon my
visiti
to the local shop I noticed the building needs
some
renovations, I would
love
to
help
thereby putting
some
things in place by providing a platform where we can reach out to
people
who would
help
with funds in buying
some
building materials for renovation.

I will be looking at
first
week of January which is an ideal time considering that most salary earners on the alumni platform
must
have
been paid
thier
salaries and would be able to reach and donate to the building project.

Morealso
some
executives from the
alumnia
unit would
also
put and create awareness to
some
donors to ensure the project kick
starts
as
soon
as possible.

Thank you for your time.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Rita
Okologume
.
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IELTS letter You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people to help renovate the building and also help with some activities. Write a letter to the principal and say how would you be able to help? When and why would you do it? Who will help you to do it?

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