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Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

Dear Karthik While searching in online i got to know about a course called Data Science and this course collect all the information about internet date and this course starts from the next week strating. This Data Sciences course extremely usefull to our company at present days all the people are using E-commerce websites but ample of online shopping sites not getting accurate information about users interest with the help of this data sciences course we can solve this problem and by learning this course ample of benefits to our company. Company can get accurate information about our products like and dislikes and statistics also and through our company we can give support to the all online websites and pethora amount of money can generate more. I look forward hearing from you, Thanking you, Mahesh. K
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Karthik


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we can solve this problem and by learning this
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ample of benefits to our
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company
we can give support to the all online websites and
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amount of money can generate more.

I look forward hearing from you,

Thanking you,

Mahesh. K

IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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