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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. VBKj7
Greetings Mr. ahmad, I hope you doing great. I was received your write and I am writting this letter for you to explain the reasone for our noise that annoyed you last day. First of all, I apologise that our voices and music was very loud. The noise that came from my department was calibrate and reaction from good news that came from my family all the way from Saudi Arabia, tells me that my big sister is pregnant and the first baby boy will come to our family after five to six months, and finally i will be anut. I also receved that my graduation day will be next months and I will back home soon. I apologise again, and I promise that i will never annoyin you agian. I hope that you accept the flowers and chocolates that I send it today's morning and I will waiting for you to visit me. All respects, Aisha.
Greetings Mr.
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ahmad
, I hope
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you doing
great. I
was received
your
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write and
I am
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writting
this letter for you to
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explain
the
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reasone
for our noise that annoyed you last day.

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First of all
, I
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apologise
that our voices and music was
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very
loud. The noise that came from my department was
Consider using a past participle here: "calibrated".
calibrate
and reaction from
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good
news that came from my family all the way from Saudi Arabia,
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tells
me that my
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big
sister is pregnant and the
first
baby boy will
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come
to our family after five to six months, and
finally
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i
will be
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anut
. I
also
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receved
that my graduation day will be
next
months and I will back home
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soon
.

I
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apologise
again, and I promise that
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i
will never
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annoyin
you
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agian
.
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I
hope that you accept the flowers and chocolates that I
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send
it
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today
's morning and I will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "wait"
waiting
for you to visit me.

All respects,

Aisha.

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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