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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. VBKj7
Greetings Mr. ahmad, I hope you doing great. I was received your write and I am writting this letter for you to explain the reasone for our noise that annoyed you last day. First of all, I apologise that our voices and music was very loud. The noise that came from my department was calibrate and reaction from good news that came from my family all the way from Saudi Arabia, tells me that my big sister is pregnant and the first baby boy will come to our family after five to six months, and finally i will be anut. I also receved that my graduation day will be next months and I will back home soon. I apologise again, and I promise that i will never annoyin you agian. I hope that you accept the flowers and chocolates that I send it today's morning and I will waiting for you to visit me. All respects, Aisha.
Greetings Mr.
ahmad
, I hope
you doing
great. I
was received
your
write and
I am
writting
this letter for you to
explain
the
reasone
for our noise that annoyed you last day.

First of all
, I
apologise
that our voices and music was
very
loud. The noise that came from my department was
calibrate
and reaction from
good
news that came from my family all the way from Saudi Arabia,
tells
me that my
big
sister is pregnant and the
first
baby boy will
come
to our family after five to six months, and
finally
i
will be
anut
. I
also
receved
that my graduation day will be
next
months and I will back home
soon
.

I
apologise
again, and I promise that
i
will never
annoyin
you
agian
.
I
hope that you accept the flowers and chocolates that I
send
it
today
's morning and I will
waiting
for you to visit me.

All respects,

Aisha.
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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