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Write a letter to China explain your feelings

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Dear china, Last year 31st January, I left you with the hope in my eyes to see you again. I never knew it was my last time breating in your air and if I knew this, I would have stayed longer. People often ask me why do I miss or love you that much? This question gives me a glimpse of memories and thoes wonderful moments I've spent with you. You received a naive baby and groomed her into a confident lady. You made me discover splendid parts of me I had no clue existed. You helped me grow and made me the person I'm today. You've seen me crying and laughing out loud. You gave me life long friendships and people i could cherish my good days with and count in my bad ones. It took you just few days to make me fall for you and here I'm confessing that i had fallen for you long long ago and now I miss waking up in your fresh mornings and staying up late in your peaceful nights. I miss watching people on your roads from the balcony. I miss those long walks on your crystal clear roads and talking to you about random things. I miss sitting on the bench for hours doing nothing. I miss 2am talks sitting at the bank of lake. Oh Changsha, I miss wondering in your streets knowing myself more and I miss chanting in the air. I love the way you make everyone strive for their goals. I miss that hustle in your crowds and love in your city lights. I never knew I would get attached to you so much. I found it true that you never leave the place you love,   you take a part of it with you and leave a part of you there. People will never understand what you mean to me. I’ll always adore the way you welcome people and make them feel like home and I would never hesitate to say that you are like a second home to me and you would always stay in my closest memory. Thankyou for those beautiful memories. ❤❤ Your's truly
Dear china,

Last year 31st January, I
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left
you with the hope in my eyes to
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see
you again. I never knew it was my last time
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breating
in your air and if I knew this, I would have stayed longer.
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People
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often
ask me why do I miss or
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love
you that much? This question gives me a glimpse of memories and
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thoes
wonderful moments I've spent with you.

You received a naive baby and groomed her into a confident lady. You made me discover splendid parts of me I had no clue existed.
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You
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helped
me grow and made me the person I'm
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today
.

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You
've
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seen
me crying and laughing out loud.
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You
gave me life
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long
friendships and
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people
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i
could cherish my
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good
days with and count in my
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bad
ones. It took you
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just
few days to
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make
me fall for you and here I'm confessing that
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i
had fallen for you
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long
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long
ago and
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now
I miss waking up in your fresh mornings and staying up late in your peaceful nights. I miss watching
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people
on your roads from the balcony. I miss those
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long
walks on your crystal
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clear
roads and talking to you about random things.
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I
miss sitting on the bench for hours doing nothing.
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I
miss 2am talks sitting at the bank of lake. Oh Changsha, I miss wondering in your streets knowing myself more and I miss chanting in the air. I
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love
the way you
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make
everyone
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strive
for their goals. I miss that hustle in your crowds and
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love
in your city lights.
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I
never knew I would
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get
attached to you
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so
much.
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I
found it true that you never
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leave
the place you
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love
,
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you take a part of it with you and
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leave
a part of you there.

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People
will never understand what you mean to me. I’ll always adore the way you welcome
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people
and
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make
them feel like home and I would never hesitate to say that you are like a second home to me and you would always stay in my closest memory.
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Thankyou
for those
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beautiful
memories.
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❤❤


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IELTS letter Write a letter to China explain your feelings

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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