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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her oRpPD
Dear Reetu, How are you? I'm writing this letter with reference to a letter asking for advice about weather to pursue further studies pursue further studies or a job. Well, I would say that you should get some practical experience before continue your University education. It is irrefutable, that continue your study bill enable you to finish your double degree soon. But, at the same time, it will not be productive as you are tired of studying and might not be able to give your best. As we know, human mind needs a break. Moreover, doing job will give you an opportunity to put something on your cover letter in future when you are going to apply for a higher position after University. Also, it will assist you in having more funds, so you don't need to worry about managing your expenses while you are studying. Since you are computer literate Anne has been studying from secondary school. So, I think you should be looking for the jobs as a computer programmer. Further, it will explore more opportunity for you in the future to get a good position in a reputed company, such as Google. I hope this advice will help you to make your final decision. Lots of love for my cousins. Yours lovingly, Shikha
Dear
Reetu
, How are you? I'm writing this letter with reference to a letter asking for advice about weather to pursue
further
studies pursue
further
studies or a job. Well, I would say that you should
get
some
practical experience
before
continue your University education.

It is irrefutable, that continue your study bill enable you to finish your double degree
soon
.
But
, at the same time, it will not be productive as you
are tired
of studying and might not be able to give your best. As we know, human mind needs a break.

Moreover
, doing job will give you an opportunity to put something on your cover letter in future when you are going to apply for a higher position after University.
Also
, it will assist you in having more funds,
so
you don't need to worry about managing your expenses while you are studying.

Since
you are
computer literate
Anne has been studying from secondary school.
So
, I
think
you should be looking for the jobs as a computer programmer.
Further
, it will explore more opportunity for you in the future to
get
a
good
position in a reputed
company
, such as Google.

I hope this advice will
help
you to
make
your final decision. Lots of
love
for my cousins.

Yours
lovingly
,
Shikha
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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6 paragraphs
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6.0
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