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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take wBPYm
Hello All, My name is Sally Dunst and I am the owner of apartment number 42 on the second floor at Dunsmuir Apartments. I recently received the complaint letter about the noise coming from my apartment. I recently experienced leakage in my bathroom where the water from the toilet started seeping onto the floor. Since my apartment is a 1 bedroom and 1 bathroom apartment it was difficult for me to use the bathroom and the leakage had started damaging the flooring. I spoke to the building contractor and he found many other problems with the bathroom pipeline and suggested renovating the whole bathroom at the earliest so no problems would come up in the future. I sincerely apologize for the noise due to renovation works. I understand it can be quite frustrating at times. After having a discussion with the contractor he said the bathroom renovation would take two more days if worked for 6 hours each day. The contractors would work from 11 am to 5 pm keeping in mind that it's not too early and not too late during the day. Please let me know if this proposition is not feasible or do not hesitate to contact me if there are any further concerns. Again I apologize in advance for any hindrance. Sincerely, Sally Dunst
Hello All,

My name is Sally
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Dunst and
I am the owner of
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apartment
number 42 on the second floor at
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Dunsmuir
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Apartments
. I recently received the complaint letter about the noise coming from my
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apartment
. I recently experienced leakage in my
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bathroom
where the water from the toilet
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started
seeping onto the floor. Since my
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apartment
is a 1 bedroom and 1
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bathroom
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apartment
it was difficult for me to
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use
the
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bathroom
and the leakage had
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started
damaging the flooring. I spoke to the building
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contractor and
he found
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many
other problems with the
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bathroom
pipeline and suggested renovating the whole
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bathroom
at the earliest
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so
no problems would
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come
up in the future.

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sincerely
apologize for the noise due to renovation works.
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I
understand it can be quite frustrating at times. After having a discussion with the contractor he said the
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bathroom
renovation would take two more days if worked for 6 hours each day. The contractors would work from 11 am to 5 pm keeping in mind that it's not too early and not too late during the day.
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Please
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let
me know if this proposition is not feasible or do not hesitate to contact me if there are any
further
concerns. Again I apologize in advance for any hindrance.

Sincerely
,

Sally
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Dunst

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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  American English
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217 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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