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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take PBYd
Dear Mr. Raj, Hope you are in good state of health. I am writing this letter in reply to yours which stated about the disturbance cause by me. As your are familiar with the refurbishment of my flat that is going on since a month. All of a sudden, I had planned to change my kitchen cabinets. And here is where the proble started, the workers had to use heavy drill machine for the process, which caused such noise. Moreover, I had few wall hangings to be put on in my room for which I was forced to use the hammer. Furthermore, the workers were available only after dinner. I sincerely applogise for the trouble by me. I make it a point that I do all the chores in the day and you can spend a peacefull night. I wish to invite you on a cup of coffee tomorrow evening, as a token of love and sorry. Hope to see you tomorrow. Your's faithfully, Ms. Mohammed
Dear Mr. Raj,

Hope you are in
good
state of health. I am writing this letter in reply to yours which stated about the disturbance cause by me.

As your are familiar with the refurbishment of my flat
that is
going on since a month. All of a sudden, I had planned to
change
my kitchen cabinets. And here is where the
proble
started
, the workers had to
use
heavy drill machine for the process, which caused such noise.
Moreover
, I had few wall hangings to
be put
on in my room for which I
was forced
to
use
the hammer.
Furthermore
, the workers were available
only
after dinner.

I
sincerely
applogise
for the trouble by me. I
make
it a point that I do all the chores in the day and you can spend a
peacefull
night.

I
wish to invite you on a cup of coffee tomorrow evening, as a token of
love
and sorry. Hope to
see
you tomorrow.

Your's
faithfully
,

Ms. Mohammed
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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