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You are going on holiday and have just remembered that your aunt lives in one of the cities you will be visiting. Write a letter to your aunt. In your letter: Tell her about your holiday plans Ask if you can stay with her for a portion of the trip Explain how you will make it up to her.

You are going on holiday and have just remembered that your aunt lives in one of the cities you will be visiting. Write a letter to your aunt. In your letter: Tell her about your holiday plans Ask if you can stay with her for a portion of the trip Explain how you will make it up to her. WpPe
Dear Aunt Sally, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and good spirit. The purpose writing this letter is to inform you that I'm visiting your city for one week regarding a project on topic "food and culture". On the one hand I will finish essential task on Impact of culture on food, Hence will give me an Opportunity to spend time with you. Therefore please keep some days vacant for two of us. It has been long time since we talked or met in person. I am planning to stay for couple of days with you in the light of the fact that your knowledge of local area will be an asset for my work, More over I want to catchup on my nostalgic memories at your place. If you need anything from Delhi do let me know, Other than that a bouquet dinner at your town for you immense help is on me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Lovingly
Dear Aunt Sally,

I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and
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spirit. The purpose writing this letter is to inform you that I'm visiting your city for one week regarding a project on topic
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food and culture
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. On the one hand I will finish essential task on Impact of culture on food,
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will give me an Opportunity to spend time with you.
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Therefore
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please
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keep
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days vacant for two of us. It has been long time since we talked or met in person. I am planning to stay for
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couple of
days with you in the light of the fact that your knowledge of local area will be an asset for my work, More over I want to
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catchup
on my nostalgic memories at your place.

If you need anything from Delhi do
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let
me know, Other than that a bouquet dinner at your town for you immense
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help
is on me. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Lovingly
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IELTS letter You are going on holiday and have just remembered that your aunt lives in one of the cities you will be visiting. Write a letter to your aunt. In your letter: Tell her about your holiday plans Ask if you can stay with her for a portion of the trip Explain how you will make it up to her.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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