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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there DAdm
Dear Robins, I am very excited to hear that you are moving to Toronto and would like to congratulate you for the same. Based on the information you have given to me about your workplace, I can say that you will probably be commuting to the city downtown and TTC (Toronto Transit ) could be the best option for you to commute as it connects the entire city and is very convenient, you will find people from all around the world and it has great vibes and friendly people. All you need is a Presto card to get you started. For rentals, downtown is more expensive compared to other parts of the city, I would suggest you look for rentals in the York and Scarborough regions. Further, I am sure you will meet lots of friendly people at your work and I will introduce you with my friends too. You can also live in shared houses to meet more people. Anyways I can’t wait to see you, it's been a long time. With Love Alay
Dear Robins,

I am
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excited to hear that you are moving to Toronto and would like to congratulate you for the same.

Based on the information you have
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to me about your workplace, I can say that you will
probably
be commuting to the city downtown and TTC (Toronto Transit
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could be the best option for you to commute as it connects the entire city and is
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convenient, you will find
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people
from all around the world and it has great vibes and friendly
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people
. All you need is a Presto card to
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get
you
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started
.

For rentals, downtown is more expensive compared to other parts of the city, I would suggest you look for rentals in the York and Scarborough regions.

Further
, I am sure you will
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meet
lots of friendly
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people
at your work and I will introduce you with my friends too. You can
also
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live
in shared
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houses
to
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meet
more
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people
.

Anyways I can’t wait to
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see
you, it's been a long time.

With
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Love


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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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174 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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