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One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give your opinion of your friend's business idea Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept the offer Explain your reasons for this decision.

One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give your opinion of your friend's business idea Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept the offer Explain your reasons for this decision. gKR1
Dear Tom, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and good spirit. The purpose of this letter is to reply you back regarding your preposition. Your excellent idea of opening a retirement home is spot on in the light of the fact that today is the age of greying population, More over its growing in leap and bound manner. In my opinion this is in demand Business opportunity. After proper discussion with my family I am extremely happy to tell you that I accept your proposal, Saying yes was easy! I have completed diploma one year back in gerontology which will be helpful in functional working and also Quality service. On the other hand it will help in business expansion. In the light of the fact my hopes are high to achieve immense success. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Lovingly
Dear Tom, I hope this letter finds you in Radiant health and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
spirit. The purpose of this letter is to reply you back regarding your preposition. Your excellent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of opening a retirement home is spot on in the light of the fact that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
is the age of
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greying
population, More over its growing in leap and bound manner. In my opinion this is in demand Business opportunity.

After proper discussion with my family I am
extremely
happy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that I accept your proposal, Saying yes was easy! I have completed diploma one year back in gerontology which will be helpful in functional working and
also
Quality service.
On the other hand
it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in business expansion. In the light of the fact my hopes are high to achieve immense success. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Lovingly

IELTS letter One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give your opinion of your friend's business idea Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept the offer Explain your reasons for this decision.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
143 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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