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After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department.Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. In the letter mention: Why do you want to switch departments? Which department would you prefer? Why do you think you are a good fit in that department?

After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. In the letter mention: Why do you want to switch departments? Which department would you prefer? Why do you think you are a good fit in that department? xrlN
Dear Mr. Morris, I writing this letter to enquire for internal team movement, as im keen to move to technical departmemt in our company. Firstly, as I am from btech background, I have done my gradutation in Information technology looking forward to work as an IT engineer which suits my profile and it helps enhance my career in near future. I would request you to give me an oppurtunity to attend an interview in engineering department in our office, this team works closely with development of our company and builds software of our products hence I tender this team to move in. Lastly, In my research I have found so many aspects and the process of work which is interesting and I am confident enough that this team is worthy for me as it is matching all my criteria and academics where I can cope up easily with no pressure. Im hoping for a positive response for my request. Yours Sincerely, Priyank Kumar Babburu
Dear Mr. Morris,

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I writing
this letter to
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enquire
for internal
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team
movement, as
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im
keen to
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move
to technical
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departmemt
in our
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company
.

Firstly
, as I am from
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btech
background, I have done my
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gradutation
in Information technology looking forward to work as an IT engineer which suits my profile and it
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helps
enhance my career in near future.

I would request you to give me an
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oppurtunity
to attend an interview in engineering department in our office, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
works
closely
with development of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and builds software of our products
hence
I tender this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
in.

Lastly
, In my research I have found
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so
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many
aspects and the process of work which is
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interesting and
I am confident
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enough
that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
is worthy for me as it is matching all my criteria and academics where I can cope up
easily
with no pressure.

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Im
hoping for a
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positive
response for my request.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Priyank
Kumar
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Babburu
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IELTS letter After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. In the letter mention: Why do you want to switch departments? Which department would you prefer? Why do you think you are a good fit in that department?

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