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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • tell him which team won • describe the conditions on the day • say how you felt about the match

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • tell him which team won • describe the conditions on the day • say how you felt about the match 2E8M
Dear John, How are you dear, I hope you are feeling better now and we really missed you during our last match at Coimbatore. The match on Friday was in favour to us and we won the game. There were 16 teams in total and we strive hard to play against them. However, one opponent squad was from Goa and two national players are there in the team, but we defeated them in the semi finals and then we got confidence to win. It was sunny throughout the week, all are sweating and feeling bad. Although the weather was not good, our players work hard to overcome the bad condition. They do enough practice during the break time and early morning which helps to won the tournament. Let me know when you reach home, so that I can visit you. Here all are praying for your speedy recovery. Love and regards. Mathew James
Dear John,

How are you dear, I hope you are feeling better
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
now and
we
really
missed you during our last match at Coimbatore.

The match on Friday was in
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
to
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us and
we won the game. There were 16 teams in
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total and
we strive
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hard
to play against them.
However
, one opponent squad was from Goa and two national players are there in the team,
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but
we defeated them in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
semi finals
and then we
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got
confidence to win.

It was sunny throughout the week, all are sweating and feeling
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bad
. Although the weather was not
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good
, our players work
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hard
to overcome the
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bad
condition. They do
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enough
practice during the break time and early morning which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
Did you mean "to win"?
to won
the tournament.

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Let
me know when you reach home,
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so
that I can visit you. Here all are praying for your speedy recovery.

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Love
and regards.

Mathew James

IELTS letter You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • tell him which team won • describe the conditions on the day • say how you felt about the match

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