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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words

Dear mrs. brown, I just received your complaint about the noise coming from my flat. I totally understand how difficult it would have been for you. My sister is here for vacation with her twins toddlers. Because of the cold weather outside, they're frusted staying home all and are throwing tantrums. I apologise for the inconvinience caused by my nephews. I couldn't help but think how hard it is for you to work from home in this noisey atmosphere. I'll bringing you an appology basket as well. I wish I could've found an alternative before all this trouble I gave you. Who knew having toddlers was a handfull of a job. I have bought mats to instal on the floor so that next time when they throw something you're not disturbed. I will also install sound proof sheets underneath the mats. I will try my best to take them outside for a walk or a drive so that they're not exhausted and won't scream. yours faithfully, XYZ
Dear
mrs
.
brown
,

I
just
received your complaint about the noise coming from my flat. I
totally
understand how difficult it would have been for you. My sister is here for vacation with her twins toddlers.
Because
of the
cold
weather outside, they'
re frusted
staying home all and are throwing tantrums.

I
apologise
for the
inconvinience
caused by my nephews. I couldn't
help
but
think
how
hard
it is for you to work from home in this
noisey
atmosphere.
I
'll
bringing
you an
appology
basket
as well
.
I
wish I could've found an alternative
before
all this trouble I gave you.

Who
knew having toddlers was a
handfull
of a job. I have
bought
mats to
instal
on the floor
so
that
next
time when they throw something you're not disturbed. I will
also
install
sound proof
sheets underneath the mats.
I
will try my best to take them outside for a walk or a drive
so
that they're not exhausted and won't scream.

yours
faithfully
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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