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A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,    thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it describe some other presents that you received explain some of the things you did on your birthday

Dear Pinkesh, I hope you and your family are all doing well. It has been too long since we were last in touch. Yesterday, on my birthday, I received your presence, and after I could not resist myself from writing you how much your gift lifted my mood. Thank you for choosing such a thoughtful piece. With this, I received many gifts, but the photo frame you have gifted is the most adorable compare to others. You have included all the events starting from our schooldays programs, collages function and most importantly it contains photos of the medals that we earn after a lot of hard work during post-graduation program. In addition, it has pictures of our together trips to Goa, Mumbai, and Shimla which melt my heart with full of emotions. Apart from this, my father gives a watch, my uncle gifted me a shoes of Woodland and my other friends gave me perfume, a novel and many more. Moreover, this time I organized a dinner party on small scale, for that I selected one of the rooftop restaurants of Ahmedabad, the “Green Perl”. The venue is popular for its amazing ambiance, location, and taste of foods. To bring one step up, my brother arranged one live singer for entertainment which eventually became the center of attraction. To recapitulate, I must say it was the most memorable birthday, and thank you so much for a beautiful gift. Best wishes, Ami
Dear
Pinkesh
,

I hope you and your family are all doing well. It has been too long since we were last in touch. Yesterday, on my birthday, I received your presence, and after I could not resist myself from writing you how much your gift lifted my mood. Thank you for choosing such a thoughtful piece.

With this, I received
many
gifts,
but
the photo frame you have gifted is the most adorable compare to others. You have included all the
events
starting from our schooldays programs, collages function and most
importantly
it contains photos of the medals that we earn after
a lot of
hard
work during post-graduation program.
In addition
, it has pictures of our together trips to Goa, Mumbai, and
Shimla
which melt my heart with full of emotions. Apart from this, my father gives a
watch
, my uncle gifted me
a shoes
of Woodland and my other friends gave me perfume, a novel and
many
more.

Moreover
, this time I organized a dinner party on
small
scale, for that I selected one of the rooftop restaurants of Ahmedabad, the “Green Perl”. The venue is popular for its amazing ambiance, location, and taste of foods. To bring one step up, my brother arranged one
live
singer for entertainment which
eventually
became the center of attraction.

To recapitulate, I
must
say it was the most memorable birthday, and thank you
so
much for a
beautiful
gift.

Best wishes,

Ami
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IELTS letter A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,    thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it describe some other presents that you received explain some of the things you did on your birthday

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  American English
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240 words
5.5
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