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Your company has decided to offer a period of work experience to a student in a local school. You have been asked by your manager to write a letter to the principal of the school

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in response to your advertisement published in today’s edition of the Business Ukraine magazine. As you can see from my enclosed CV, I have spent the last 5 years working at Orion Company. I joined the branch as an English teacher and trainer for corporate clients after I tendered my resignation following the undue disrespect and patronizing attitude of the former employer. My duties range from developing customized Business English & General English courses to conducting classes and intensive trainings. I am also responsible for carrying out English assessment for the employees and maintaining internal documents, including tracking and reporting on the student’s progress. Despite the fact that my current position gives me both a tremendous sense of job satisfaction and an attractive remuneration package, I have no inclination to persevere. In light of this, I am now interested in working in a more dynamic IT environment so that I can work my way up to a top manager. Given the experience gained and the necessary managerial as well as interpersonal skills developed, I consider myself well equipped to take up the challenge offered by the post of Language School Receptionist. I also feel I possess the right personal qualities and vast reserves of stamina to meet the demands of the job; I have included in the CV the contact details of my branch manager, who would be pleased to provide you with a character reference. I am available for interview at any time which might be convenient to you and would be able start work after serving out the fortnight’s notice in my present job. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Ira Vovk
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing in response to your advertisement published in
today
’s edition of the Business Ukraine magazine.

As you can
see
from my enclosed CV, I have spent the last 5 years working at Orion
Company
. I
joined
the branch as an English teacher and trainer for corporate clients after I tendered my resignation following the undue disrespect and patronizing attitude of the former employer. My duties range from developing customized Business English & General English courses to conducting classes and intensive trainings. I am
also
responsible for carrying out English assessment for the employees and maintaining internal documents, including tracking and reporting on the student’s progress.

Despite the fact that my
current
position gives me both a tremendous sense of job satisfaction and an attractive remuneration package, I have no inclination to persevere. In light of this, I am
now
interested in working in a more dynamic IT environment
so
that I can work my way up to a top manager.
Given
the experience gained and the necessary managerial
as well
as interpersonal
skills
developed, I consider myself
well equipped
to take up the challenge offered by the post of Language School Receptionist. I
also
feel I possess the right personal qualities and vast reserves of stamina to
meet
the demands of the job; I have included in the CV the contact
details
of my branch manager, who would be
pleased
to provide you with a character reference.

I am available for interview at any time which might be convenient to you and would be able
start
work after serving out the fortnight’s notice in my present job.

I
look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully


Ira
Vovk
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IELTS letter Your company has decided to offer a period of work experience to a student in a local school. You have been asked by your manager to write a letter to the principal of the school

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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