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Dear Sir or MadamI am writing this to express my serious concern about an article published in your international travel magazine on 2nd January, 2020. This article was about Kurukshetra (India), which is my hometown. Kurukshetra is a renowned and religious tourist place, centrally located in Haryana. The article contained wrong information about Kurukshetra that I would like to highlight. Firstly, the article explained that it is known "Land of Pandwas", which is not correct. The place is called Land of Mahabharata, as the battle of Mahabharat took place between Korwas and Pandwas in Kurukshetra. Moreover, it was published that the tourists visit Kurukshetra in between March to October. However, Kurukshetra is an international tourist place, and tourists visit there throughout the year. I request you to publish this article again with correct information so that it will not affect the tourism industry. I hope you would understand my concern. Thank youYours Obediently
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published in your international travel magazine on 2nd
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information about
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Kurukshetra
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Firstly
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Land of
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Pandwas
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, which is not correct. The
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Land of Mahabharata, as the battle of
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Mahabharat
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between
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Kurukshetra
.
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tourists
visit
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Kurukshetra
in between March to October.
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,
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Kurukshetra
is an international
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tourist
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place
, and
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tourists
visit there throughout the year. I request you to publish this
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article
again with correct information
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that it will not affect the tourism industry. I hope you would understand my concern. Thank
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

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