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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Mr Hamidi, I'm writing this letter to express my interest in attending the head office in London for six months. to begin whit, as a new marketing manager in your company, I found that sales of the company's products had declined in the last few months. I evaluated the sale process and financial documents and I realized that the main problem is related to the marketing section. I believe that I need more experience to cooperation with your company. In addition, in my opinion the marketing methods that use in the company is old and we need to some new ways to introduce products to people. Therefore, I asked you to approve my request and I try to learn new marketing methods. I believe that the six-month period can help both me and the company. During this time, I can ask one of my co-workers to perform my duties in the company. I would appreciate if you approve my request and I look forward to hearing from you. yours faithfully, Anna Martin. Yours faithfully, Anna Martin.

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I'm writing this letter to express my interest in attending the head office in London for six months.

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