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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Khan I am writing to apologize for the troubles caused by our side. I got your complaint letter regarding the noise from our home. The main reason behind this was my son's birthday. He insisted to celebrate his 10th birthday with his friends at home. So, we hold a little party at our flat. Some of our relatives and friends were also invited. My cousin's has twins babies and they were crying whole day which was the main cause of creating noise and disturbance. Another reason was, the loud music that has been arranged by my son's friends and we couldn't stop them. Furthermore, there were some games that were creating a noisy sound like dance competition, dumb sharats etc. Therefore, accept my sincere apologize for the troubles, caused from our side. I will try my best to avoid such type of disturbing noises and freaky parties at home. You will have no complaint for the next times. Warm Regards, John Kally

Dear Mr. Khan

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got
 your complaint letter regarding the noise from our home.

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So
, we hold a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 party at our flat. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of our relatives and friends were also
 invited. My cousin's has twins babies and they were crying whole day which was the main cause of creating noise and disturbance.

Another reason was, the loud music that has been arranged
 by my son's friends and we couldn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 them. Furthermore
, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 games that were creating a noisy sound like dance competition, dumb sharats etc.

Therefore
, accept my sincere apologize for the troubles, caused from our side. I will try my best to avoid such type of disturbing noises and freaky parties at home. You will have no complaint for the next
 times.

Warm Regards,

John Kally

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

163 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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