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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Khan I am writing to apologize for the troubles caused by our side. I got your complaint letter regarding the noise from our home. The main reason behind this was my son's birthday. He insisted to celebrate his 10th birthday with his friends at home. So, we hold a little party at our flat. Some of our relatives and friends were also invited. My cousin's has twins babies and they were crying whole day which was the main cause of creating noise and disturbance. Another reason was, the loud music that has been arranged by my son's friends and we couldn't stop them. Furthermore, there were some games that were creating a noisy sound like dance competition, dumb sharats etc. Therefore, accept my sincere apologize for the troubles, caused from our side. I will try my best to avoid such type of disturbing noises and freaky parties at home. You will have no complaint for the next times. Warm Regards, John Kally
Dear Mr. Khan

I am writing to apologize for the troubles caused by our side. I
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your complaint letter regarding the noise from our home.

The main reason behind this was my son's birthday. He insisted to celebrate his 10th birthday with his friends at home.
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So
, we hold a
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little
party at our flat.
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Some
of our relatives and friends were
also
invited. My cousin's has twins babies and they were crying whole day which was the main cause of creating noise and disturbance.

Another reason was, the loud music that has
been arranged
by my son's friends and we couldn't
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stop
them.
Furthermore
, there were
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some
games that were creating a noisy sound like dance competition, dumb sharats etc.

Therefore
, accept my sincere apologize for the troubles, caused from our side. I will try my best to avoid such type of disturbing noises and freaky parties at home. You will have no complaint for the
next
times.

Warm Regards,

John
Kally
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
163 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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