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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.

Dear Mel, I hope this letter finds you good health. First of all, thank you very much for asking me to visit Singapore and I am excited to meet you all. As you know, I never visited Asia countries before so I thought of writing to you to get some information clarified before I make my trip. I am planning to bring some present for your daughter. It would be great if you can share about her hobbies and interest so I can come up with some choices and buy some memorable gift. Apart from that, what sort of outfits suitable for Singapore weather? Also, what kind of activities are we likely to do while I am there such as swimming, trekking etc. , so I can pack my swimming gears and trainers. Finally, as you know I am recently turned vegan. I have no problem eating egg and fish but can’t take red meat. Hope it’s not a serious problem. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Regards, Sundar

Dear Mel,

I hope this letter finds you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health. First
 of all, thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much for asking me to visit Singapore and I am excited
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you all.

As you know, I never visited Asia countries This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 of writing to you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information clarified This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 my trip.

I am planning to bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 present for your daughter. It would be great if you can share about her hobbies and interest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 up with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 choices and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 memorable gift.

Apart from that, what sort of outfits suitable for Singapore weather? Also
, what kind of activities are we likely to do while I am there such as swimming, trekking etc. , This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can pack my swimming gears and trainers.

Finally
, as you know I am recently turned vegan. I have no problem eating egg and fish This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 can’t take red meat. Hope it’s not a serious problem.

Looking forward to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Regards,

Sundar