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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.

Dear Mel, I hope this letter finds you good health. First of all, thank you very much for asking me to visit Singapore and I am excited to meet you all. As you know, I never visited Asia countries before so I thought of writing to you to get some information clarified before I make my trip. I am planning to bring some present for your daughter. It would be great if you can share about her hobbies and interest so I can come up with some choices and buy some memorable gift. Apart from that, what sort of outfits suitable for Singapore weather? Also, what kind of activities are we likely to do while I am there such as swimming, trekking etc. , so I can pack my swimming gears and trainers. Finally, as you know I am recently turned vegan. I have no problem eating egg and fish but can’t take red meat. Hope it’s not a serious problem. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Regards, Sundar
Dear Mel,

I hope this letter finds you
good
health.
First
of all, thank you
very
much for asking me to visit Singapore and I
am excited
to
meet
you all.

As you know, I never visited Asia countries
before
so
I
thought
of writing to you to
get
some
information clarified
before
I
make
my trip.

I am planning to bring
some
present for your daughter. It would be great if you can share about her hobbies and interest
so
I can
come
up with
some
choices and
buy
some
memorable gift.

Apart from that, what sort of outfits suitable for Singapore weather?
Also
, what kind of activities are we likely to do while I am there such as swimming, trekking etc. ,
so
I can pack my swimming gears and trainers.

Finally
, as you know I am recently turned vegan. I have no problem eating egg and fish
but
can’t take red meat. Hope it’s not a serious problem.

Looking forward to hear from you
soon
.

Regards,

Sundar
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IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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